Hey Zack
Greenlamp from Fusion-Revolution here, lets give you some comments.
Lets see, where to start.
Its better than what i could do, but you could touch some things up.
Story: 3/10
Sorry, its an alright idea, just that so many people do that, know what i mean??
Next one, make the story original. (Its hard to do with sticks i know!)
Graphics 7/10 (1/10 comparing with KS and The Castle)
I've noticed people are using the effects in flash a shit more than they should.
I think in looks crap.
You on the other hand make great backrounds, blur it just the right ammount.
I just dont like the coloured chopper, to blurry, cant understand the detail, it makes it look sloppy. (Like my typing :P)
Sound 2/10
It's alright if you did it yourself, mabey change your voice alot more though for different characters, or they sound the same.
Music 6/10
Dramatic.
Good for sticks
Overal allright, your pretty cool.
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Nytro Carbon Goooooodnes.